3. Start a fire
Spark a reaction with copy as sharp as your thinking.
Captivate your audience and inspire response with active, vibrant language. Vary sentence length—longer sentences link key ideas, short sentences add pop.
Scrutinize forms of to be. Where possible, use verbs to crystallize your points. “We are at the forefront of the industry” becomes “We lead the industry.”
Don’t change verbs into nouns. Embrace action: “We provide support throughout your career” works better as “We support you throughout your career.”
Retire jargon. Take these words offline: actionable, leverage, functionality, incent, impactful and synergy.
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